[git commit] Shorten some text

[Denys Vlasenko]

commit: http://git.busybox.net/busybox-website/commit/?id=078e6f30798e2443a8b165c636131da716403d62
branch: http://git.busybox.net/busybox-website/commit/?id=refs/heads/master

Signed-off-by: Denys Vlasenko <vda.linux at googlemail.com>
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     <a href="http://busybox.net/fix.html">how to add a patch</a>)</p>
 
     <p>Bug fix release. 1.24.1 has fixes for
-    ftpd (now DIR parameter will work for non-root too),
+    ftpd (DIR parameter works for non-root too),
     httpd (heap overflow fix),
     sort (fix for a a problem affecting glibc build).
     Build system has a fix for the lost link-time optimizations. In 1.24.0 announcement,
-    you might have noticed than data section size unexpectedly grew relative to 1.23.2. Now it is fixed:
-    sizes of busybox-1.23.2, busybox-1.24.0,  busybox-1.24.1 (with equivalent config, static uclibc build):<pre>
+    you might have noticed that sizes unexpectedly grew relative to 1.23.2. Now it is fixed:<pre>
    text    data     bss     dec     hex filename
  860126     486    7272  867884   d3e2c busybox-1.23.2
  869074     516    7364  876954   d619a busybox-1.24.0 (buggy link script)
  858906     486    7180  866572   d390c busybox-1.24.0 (fixed link script)
  858941     486    7180  866607   d392f busybox-1.24.1</pre>
     </p>
-  </li>
 
-  <p>Check out a new applet, "uevent". It is a netlink listener. It provides
-  alternative to having mdev as kernel hotplug helper. Instead of setting up
-  the former via "echo /sbin/mdev >/proc/sys/kernel/hotplug", run "uevent mdev"
-  early during boot. "uevent" will run "mdev" for each hotplug event, waiting
-  for each child to terminate before starting a next one.</p>
+    <p>Check out a new applet, "uevent". It is a netlink listener. It provides
+    alternative to having mdev as kernel hotplug helper. Instead of setting up
+    the former via "echo /sbin/mdev >/proc/sys/kernel/hotplug", start "uevent mdev"
+    early during boot. "uevent" will run "mdev" for each hotplug event, waiting
+    for each child to terminate before starting a next one.</p>
 
-  <p>The former method does not require a long-lived listener process,
-  but it is racy: many copies of mdev can run in parallel.</p>
+    <p>The former method does not require a long-lived listener process,
+    but it is racy: many copies of mdev can run in parallel.</p>
+  </li>
 
   <li><b>12 October 2015 -- BusyBox 1.24.0 (unstable)</b>
     <p><a href="http://busybox.net/downloads/busybox-1.24.0.tar.bz2">BusyBox 1.24.0</a>.