[Buildroot] [RFC] Slides "Using Buildroot for real projects"
Thomas De Schampheleire
patrickdepinguin+buildroot at gmail.com
Sat Oct 22 17:04:48 UTC 2011
On Fri, Oct 21, 2011 at 3:43 PM, Thomas Petazzoni
<thomas.petazzoni at free-electrons.com> wrote:
> Le Mon, 17 Oct 2011 18:47:18 +0200,
> Thomas Petazzoni <thomas.petazzoni at free-electrons.com> a écrit :
>> The current (unfinished) status of my slides is visible at:
> First of all, I'd like to thank Peter, Baruch, Thomas, Arnout and Will
> who gave some useful comments about my slides.
> At the same URL above, I have published a new version, which hopefully
> addresses your comments, and also adds some more slides on various
> topics. The slides should now, at least in terms of contents, represent
> what I had in mind for this talk.
> Now, if you're still willing to spend some time on this, I'd like to
> have comments on:
> * remaining english typos, wording improvements, etc.
> * suggestions of additional contents/topics if there is something I
> missed. Like if you use best practices that aren't described in
> those slides.
p4: s/build a kernel image/a kernel image/ (the 'build' is already
mentioned in the header)
p4: for symmetry reasons, I would suggest to start the last point also
with 'It builds' instead of 'Builds'
p4: the 'composed of Busybox' seems odd to me, because 'Busybox' is
one item. Maybe a native English speaker (Will?) can give feedback on
this. Suggestions from me are 'containing Busybox' or 'based on
p4/5 title: on page 4 there is a question mark, not so on page 5.
p5: I'm unsure what you're trying to say with 'Standard languages
used'. If you refer to make, that was already covered on the previous
slide and may be redundant here.
p5: you're mainly typing full sentences, which is good IMO. But the
'Need to do complete rebuilds' is not consistent with that. I'd
suggest 'You need to ...'.
p10/11: reminder: still lists a TODO about build time
p12: s/more choice/more choices/ (at least, that's my feeling)
p12: first bullet says: "Buildroot complete rebuild", second says:
"complete Buildroot rebuild". This should be consistent. I prefer the
Thanks for the credit, and:
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