[Buildroot] [PATCH v2 06/11] manual: update working-with.txt

[Thomas De Schampheleire]

On Sun, May 13, 2012 at 12:38 PM, Samuel Martin <s.martin49 at gmail.com> wrote:
> From: Samuel MARTIN <s.martin49 at gmail.com>
>
>
> Signed-off-by: Samuel Martin <s.martin49 at gmail.com>
>
> diff --git a/docs/manual/rebuilding-packages.txt b/docs/manual/rebuilding-packages.txt
> index 717121a..6b486cf 100644
> --- a/docs/manual/rebuilding-packages.txt
> +++ b/docs/manual/rebuilding-packages.txt
> @@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ by the different packages, so some understanding of the particular
>  package is needed.
>
>  For packages relying on Buildroot packages infrastructures (see

I know that you didn't change this here, but I'd change the second
'packages' to singular:
... on Buildroot package infrastructures.

> -xref:add-packages[this section] for details), the following stamp
> -files are relevant:
> +xref:adding-packages[] for details), the following stamp files are
> +relevant:
>
>  * +output/build/packagename-version/.stamp_configured+. If removed,
>   Buildroot will trigger the recompilation of the package from the
> diff --git a/docs/manual/working-with.txt b/docs/manual/working-with.txt
> index 01f1041..b9d915c 100644
> --- a/docs/manual/working-with.txt
> +++ b/docs/manual/working-with.txt
> @@ -1,6 +1,9 @@
>  Working with Buildroot
>  ======================
> -[[working-with-br]]
> +
> +This section aims to explain how Buildroot allows you to tune,
> +customize almost everthing... making your configuration fitting your
> +needs.

What is the difference between tune and customize? Later you also use
'tweaking'.
s/everthing/everything/
s/fitting/fit/

But, rephrasing suggestion:
This section explains how you can customize Buildroot to fit your needs.

>
>  include::make-tips.txt[]
>
> @@ -10,3 +13,10 @@ include::common-usage.txt[]
>
>  Tweaking Buildroot
>  ------------------
> +
> +Because Buildroot does not yet fit all your requirements, you may be
> +intrested in tweaking it to add:

s/Because/If/
s/intrested/interested/

> +
> +* new packages: refer to the xref:adding-packages[Developer guide]
> +
> +* new board support: refer to the xref:board-support[Developer guide]
> --
> 1.7.10.2
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